Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the increasing

traffic

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number of traffic

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accidents have caused many deaths and

injure

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injuries

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. Some people think that if the

government

increase

minimum

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the minimum

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legal age for driving,

the

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apply

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road safety will

be improve

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be improved

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. I disagree with the opinion and

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consider that some more significant policies leading to safety should be set by the

government

.

Although

there is an element of truth in the opinion,as the impulse younger invariably

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drives

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faster than the steady older indeed ,

however

overspeed

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is a mere partial reason giving rise to

the

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traffic

accidents.

Nevertheless

,if the

government

increase

minimum

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the minimum

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legal age for driving cars,it will cause those who should have had

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rights

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right

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to drive

do

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to

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not have, which will make trouble for them in daily

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life

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. On one hand ,

i

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think the

government

should extend the time when the learners are trained in driving school to improve their driving

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, for better driving

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will make them become more experienced. Needless to say, the more experienced the drivers are the fewer

the

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traffic

accidents will occur, which had been confirmed by experts from

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the traffic

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department.

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, if

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an emergency

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circumstance happened on

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the motorway

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, a new driver would bewilder,contributing to a terrible

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consequences

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. On another hand, the

government

should set

special

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policy to limit tired driving severely , for the reason that according to the statistics almost

half

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serious

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the serious

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accident

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accidents

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happening on

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the highway

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highway

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highways

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were caused by the exhausted driver who had been steering

several

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for several

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hours .

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, a person having driven three hours must come to a halt for a rest and a trucker cannot drive on

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the highway

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after 3 am. I think

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road safety will improve if these policies are launched by the

government

.