Nowadays movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have negative effect on the society and should be banned, others, however, believe that it is harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Currently, a number of well-known movies and computer
games
are noticed to contain violent and vulgar scenes.
Although
some individuals consider them to influence
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society negatively and
hence
should be banned for
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,
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contrasting views are
also
shared by some
people
. In my opinion, I think that
such
nasty and heinous entertainment
contents
do more
harms
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than
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good to
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all classes of
public
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the public
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of any society.
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mentioning my opinion regarding
this
issue. Admittedly, it is believed that films or computer
games
should not be censored because
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may suppress their overall messages and appeal to mass
people
even if they consist of
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dirty and violent scenes.
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, most
of
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the
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action or horror or sci-fi movies and similar video
games
are based on violent
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. If the governing authority doesn't permit to
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such
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entertainment items and
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to cut
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number of scenes regarding vulgar acts,
people
are surely restrained from enjoying
such
classes of
contents
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. Another important thing to consider here is that before the beginning of
such
movies or
games
, lengthy disclaimers regarding their violence are shown on
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which explains why they are harmless
entertainments
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according to few public.
However
, the aforementioned status should not be welcomed as it is often thought that
people
can mimic their
favorite
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movie or game characters pretty fluently. And
this
particular phenomenon can bring about countless troubles in their personal
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social lives.
For instance
, an action movie or video game focusing on car racing tend to persuade an individual to run his own vehicle above
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limit which can cause
life-threatening
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accident to him as well as other
people
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his own city.
Moreover
, promoting
such
vulgar items may create anarchy within
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society. For these reasons, these notorious
contents
should be banned. In conclusion, while
people
may vary in their opinions regarding the enjoyment of violent films or computer
games
, I think that they shouldn’t be encouraged solely due to
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of selves plus
social
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atmosphere.
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