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Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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International
cooperation
 is now everywhere: the clothes we wear, the food we eat,
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 car we drive - all may be the effects of international
cooperation
. Yet when it comes to
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the issue
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issue
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 of which of the two,
the
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environmental protection or
the
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world
business
, benefits more from international
cooperation
, opinions vary from one individual to another. Needless to say, international
cooperation
 has helped a great deal in environmental protection. When dealing with some environmental issues like global warming, we need the joint effort of all countries across the
world
. Even in face of local issues,
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new technology from other countries can be very helpful. When developing the high-speed train in
China
,
for example
, a technology called “air cleaner” from Russia is used, which has helped to reduce significantly the air pollution along the railway. International
cooperation
 has greatly expanded
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world
business
 as well. International
cooperation
 can not only increase
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productivity but
also
 bring down
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costs. It is because of international
cooperation
 that American customers can enjoy
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high-quality commodities from
China
 at low prices and vice versa. Meanwhile, if countries work together, they can make their products and services more agreeable to the local people, which in turn will create more markets.
For example
, Microsoft products are all originally in English and were met with cold eyes 20 years ago when they entered
China
. It was only after Microsoft cooperated with Chinese programmers and converted the language to Chinese that its products have been widely accepted in
China
. It is hard, though, to determine which has benefited more from international
cooperation
. My immediate response would be that
world
business
 is the greater beneficiary. After all, I have seen with my own eyes how the expanded
world
business
as a result
 of
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international
cooperation
 has changed my life. Of course, I am fully aware as well that our environment is becoming better and better thanks to
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international
cooperation
.
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