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individual's
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nations
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preferred
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classes
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the New
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hours
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be joining
be joined
classroom
at home because they open their computer and learn important skills which useful for their future life. Correct article usage
the classroom
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apply
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they
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apply
and
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apply
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save
learner's
knowledge.
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learners'
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student
and
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classes
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apply
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effect
for
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on
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consequences
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are
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are
For instance
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that their poor Change the verb form
declare
student's
will be joined classes without any worries due to they give free Change the noun form
students
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for all Fix the agreement mistake
classes
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massive because their regional economy will be declined and they show their kindness. Correct article usage
the poor
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of
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