Some people think that online classes are the best while other thing regular classes do you agree or disagree?

No one can deny that Today's online classes will be popular and people like to take
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however
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believe that daily basic classes
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good
instead
of
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online. I agree with
this
notion, It
is depend
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on the
individual
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chose
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and
it
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internet subjects
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easy to attend at home
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going outside I will discuss
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the
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upcoming
coming
ucpoming
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upcoming
paragraphs.
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with the agreement, Nowadays technology is advancing day by day and all
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will be developed and new kindergartens will be
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now to attending online
class
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classes
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because it
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and comfortable. To explain,
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generations are intelligent and they like to spend their
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on
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learning something
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as Youtube all
hire
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will
be join
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classroom
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at home because they open their computer and learn important skills which useful for their future life.
For example
, In the USA many new schools will announce that their students will now
to
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take tests
on
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online based due to they spend their authority funds to make new devices and
they
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send their hire
and
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this
step are doing well impact on
community
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.
Thus
, The online
class
will
be save
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time and increase
learner's
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knowledge.
Furthermore
, The Regular based subjects will be anxiety
student's
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student
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and they need to develop their mind to set creative
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they select
daily
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class
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classes
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and it is
a
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good
effects
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for
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their learning pattern but it has
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consequence
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for their brain ability.
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. In
this
modern
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things
is
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too
much
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complex and internet-based
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study materials
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beneficial for all new youths because it is free of cost.
For instance
, In Germany, The local institutions will
be declare
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that their poor
student's
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students
student
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will be joined classes without any worries due to they give free
class
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classes
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for all
poor
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massive because their regional economy will be declined and they show their kindness.
Hence
, It is a good development for their students and their recession will be rising with the contribution
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this
thsi
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this
trend. In conclusion,
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facilities
facilties
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facilities
will be suitable for all
learner's
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learners
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and it
good
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to
chose
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choose
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one
such
as online and offline study and it depends on the
person
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taste and
they
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whether they
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doing good work to create their country's
to
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advanced.
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