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As more and more information is available online, the role of textbooks has become obsolete. Therefore, universities should replace traditional books with digital materials. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

#information #role #textbooks #universities #books #materials #situation
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many people believe the internet great source of a lot of
information
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 and many students use it to get any e-
book
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 or paper
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, many universities and schools use the internet as a guide for learning and submitting homework or assignment, which is a better e-
book
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 or traditional
book
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?. From the internet, you can get many
information
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 or any
book
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 you need at your home or anywhere at any
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such
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 as google, which is an
information
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 and data bank
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, some websites are free to get an e-
book
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 or any
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moreover
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, students can update any paper or
book
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 and they can save it or share with their classmate
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, they don’t need to go to the bookstore to buy curriculums to gain knowledge.
on the other hand
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, traditional books are not the same because of some problems. one of the most problems with using the traditional
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 is expensive
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 a modern
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 could be expensive. the
second
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 point spending a lot of
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 looking for a
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 or paper
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, many students spend
time
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 looking for what they need. in conclusion, e-books may be affected on eyes and cases some Pain because of spending
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, e-books can be read at any
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 anywhere so, I think it is great.
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