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You recently took a trip. In your absence, a friend did you a big favour. Write a letter thanking them. In your letter include. 1-What the favour was 2-How this favour helped you 3-An offer of compensation

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Dear Rahul, I hope you are doing well and keeping safe. I am writing
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 letter to express my gratitude towards the extraordinary efforts you put in when I was on a business trip to Japan
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 week. I really want to thank you for taking care of my
parents
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' needs including their medicines and helping them with groceries. As I informed you, I had to take a sudden business trip
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 week and I was so worried about my
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 as they are old and new to the city but you came to my rescue at the right time. You are a true example of the statement “ A friend in need is a friend indeed”. My
parents
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 told me how you managed to take them
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grocery shopping after work and you called them daily in the morning
reminding
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to remind
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 them about their medicines. They were content with your support and time throughout
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 period and asked me to thank you from their side as well. I am really grateful that I have a friend like you who can treat my
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 as his own. I know it must have cost you driving to and fro from your work to my house and
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 taking them everywhere for their errands, so I request you to please let me reimburse you for the fuel at least and I want to invite you and your wife for dinner
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 weekend on
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. My mother will cook some really good biryani and we all can have a good time together. Thanking you, Yours sincerely Karan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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