You recently took a trip. In your absence, a friend did you a big favour. Write a letter thanking them. In your letter include. 1-What the favour was 2-How this favour helped you 3-An offer of compensation

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Dear Rahul, I hope you are doing well and keeping safe. I am writing

this

letter to express my gratitude towards the extraordinary efforts you put in when I was on a business trip to Japan

last

week. I really want to thank you for taking care of my

parents

' needs including their medicines and helping them with groceries. As I informed you, I had to take a sudden business trip

last

week and I was so worried about my

parents

as they are old and new to the city but you came to my rescue at the right time. You are a true example of the statement “ A friend in need is a friend indeed”. My

parents

told me how you managed to take them

for

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grocery shopping after work and you called them daily in the morning

reminding

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them about their medicines. They were content with your support and time throughout

this

period and asked me to thank you from their side as well. I am really grateful that I have a friend like you who can treat my

parents

as his own. I know it must have cost you driving to and fro from your work to my house and

then

taking them everywhere for their errands, so I request you to please let me reimburse you for the fuel at least and I want to invite you and your wife for dinner

this

weekend on

saturday

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. My mother will cook some really good biryani and we all can have a good time together. Thanking you, Yours sincerely Karan

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7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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