Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets; however others think it a waste of public money when there are so many problems in earth that the government should be solving. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Researching other
planet
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is one of the most important
problems
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that some developed
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face.
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, whether or not these
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should spend plenty of
money
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on looking for life on other
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is a controversial issue. In my opinion,
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should resolve their current
problems
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. It is obvious that each country has their own
problems
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need
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to be solved. That means
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should spend
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on many important things.
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, some people think country
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spend more
money
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and resources to look for other
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and research if
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has any life
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waste
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a waste
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of public
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. Because
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there are so many
problems
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on earth and the government should spend time and
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to
solve
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.
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, the government should think about how to improve the public
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standard, how to protect the environment, and how to create more
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to increase
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educational level.
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, the government do not need to waste resources to look for other
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.
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, others,
they
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believe there
are
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life on other
planets
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,
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so
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they want to find it and making
prepare
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to migrate there. Due to developed technology, some
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have abilities to research other
planets
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. At the same time, they noticed the population is increasing quickly nowadays. The problem of
environment
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the environment
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is becoming a very important issue
affect
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people’s health.
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,
to find
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a planet which is suitable for
people
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live is necessary. I believe that
countries
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should resolve their current
problems
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first
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.
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, protecting the environment, reducing waste gas, creating new energy,
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and increasing
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invest
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in public health. All these methods can let people who
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in
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the
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earth feel more comfortable. In conclusion, all
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nations
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should
spending
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be spending
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public
money
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on
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right
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place. At the same time, developed
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could help poor
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to improve their standard of
live
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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