Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets; however others think it a waste of public money when there are so many problems in earth that the government should be solving. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Researching other
planet
is one of the most important Fix the agreement mistake
planets
problems
that some developed Use synonyms
countries
face. Use synonyms
However
, whether or not these Linking Words
countries
should spend plenty of Use synonyms
money
on looking for life on other Use synonyms
planets
is a controversial issue. In my opinion, Use synonyms
nations
should resolve their current Use synonyms
problems
.
It is obvious that each country has their own Use synonyms
problems
Use synonyms
need
to be solved. That means Correct pronoun usage
that need
nations
should spend Use synonyms
money
on many important things. Use synonyms
Therefore
, some people think country Linking Words
who
spend more Correct pronoun usage
that
money
and resources to look for other Use synonyms
planets
and research if Use synonyms
their
has any life Replace the word
there
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
waste
of public Correct article usage
a waste
money
. Because Use synonyms
of
there are so many Change preposition
apply
problems
on earth and the government should spend time and Use synonyms
money
to Use synonyms
solve
. Correct pronoun usage
themsolve
For example
, the government should think about how to improve the public Linking Words
heath
standard, how to protect the environment, and how to create more Correct your spelling
health
school
to increase Fix the agreement mistake
schools
public
educational level. Add an article
the public
As a result
, the government do not need to waste resources to look for other Linking Words
planets
.
Use synonyms
However
, others, Linking Words
they
believe there Correct pronoun usage
apply
are
life on other Change the verb form
is
planets
Use synonyms
,
so Remove the comma
apply
that
they want to find it and making Correct word choice
apply
prepare
to migrate there. Due to developed technology, some Replace the word
preparations
countries
have abilities to research other Use synonyms
planets
. At the same time, they noticed the population is increasing quickly nowadays. The problem of Use synonyms
environment
is becoming a very important issue Add an article
the environment
affect
people’s health. Change the form of the verb
affecting
Therefore
, Linking Words
to find
a planet which is suitable for Change the verb form
finding
people
live is necessary.
I believe that Change noun form
people's
countries
should resolve their current Use synonyms
problems
Use synonyms
first
. Linking Words
For example
, protecting the environment, reducing waste gas, creating new energy, Linking Words
increasing
Correct word choice
and increasing
invest
in public health. All these methods can let people who Replace the word
investment
living
Change the form of the verb
live
in
Change preposition
on
the
earth feel more comfortable.
In conclusion, all Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
nations
should Use synonyms
spending
public Change the verb form
spend
be spending
money
Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
right
place. At the same time, developed Add an article
the right
countries
could help poor Use synonyms
nations
to improve their standard of Use synonyms
live
.Change the verb form
living
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite