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Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies you think is better?

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The main practical problem that confronts us is applying an intervention based on evidence by comparing
between
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more than two techniques to decrease
preoperative
anxiety
 in pediatric patients.
First
 of all , midazolam is considered a gold standard medication for decreasing
preoperative
anxiety
 in children; As well as in treating postoperative
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 disorders, but due to its rough taste and potential to raise the risk of postoperative delirium caused by Sevoflurance, midazolam is not always tolerated by patients. Rosenbaum (2009, cited in Uyar, 2021, pp. 817-828) Children's
preoperative
anxiety
 can be effectively reduced by age-appropriate audiovisual techniques
such
 as playing video games and giving informative teaching with cartoons. Chow (2016, cited in Uyar, 2021, p. 182-203) And based on evidence using
a smartphones
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 or iPad is
most
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 effective method to alleviate
anxiety
 in
preoperative
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 period, which is
most
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 relevant intervention to nursing practice that can be applied in
operation
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the operation
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 theatre.
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