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more than two techniques to decrease

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in pediatric patients.

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disorders, but due to its rough taste and potential to raise the risk of postoperative delirium caused by Sevoflurance, midazolam is not always tolerated by patients. Rosenbaum (2009, cited in Uyar, 2021, pp. 817-828) Children's

preoperative

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can be effectively reduced by age-appropriate audiovisual techniques

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as playing video games and giving informative teaching with cartoons. Chow (2016, cited in Uyar, 2021, p. 182-203) And based on evidence using

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies you think is better?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, some school leavers choose to work or travel for a year between finishing secondary school and attending to university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and then give your opinion.

Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace Why is this happening Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact to society?

In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?