It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?
In the present world, it is of
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to create scenic beauty which is often not necessary till the structure serves its own purpose. Personally, I completely agree with that and Correct your spelling
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will be reasoning my stands in the subsequent paragraphs.
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To begin
with, each of the constructions has a sole objective to facilitate the human-beings
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human beings
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, residential buildings
are built to provide habitats for Correct your spelling
individuals
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a school
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schools
college
or universities to provide educational facilities. Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
Therefore
, while designing these buildings
, engineers should be concerned of
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the outlook
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beauty
of a building may bring hassles, Correct article usage
the beauty
such
as the beauty of Dhaka University pools a huge amount of people to visit it that
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Another point worth mentioning is that beautifying a building requires Correct your spelling
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such
as the collapse of 'Rana Plaza' which was a major failure due to poor construction while the building looked outstanding visually. Besides
, in case of such
engineering failure, general people often blame engineers for not following Correct your spelling
designing
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design
instead
of caring much about safety.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that buildings
should be safe places to live, work or do other activities. So engineers should be more Correct your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite