It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?
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common trend to construct structures with complex designs in order to create scenic beauty which is often not necessary till the structure serves its own purpose. Personally, I completely agree with that and Correct article usage
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will be reasoning my stands in the subsequent paragraphs.
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To begin
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For instance
, residential buildings
are built to provide habitats for individuals whereas, some buildings
are used as schools, colleges or universities to provide educational facilities. Therefore
, while designing these buildings
, engineers should be concerned about whether the structure will fit the amenities required to live or to learn rather than how to enhance the outlook of the building. In fact, sometimes the beauty of a building may bring hassles, such
as the beauty of Dhaka University pools a huge amount of people to visit it the crowd disturbs the calmness which is a prerequisite of an academic institution.
Another point worth mentioning is that beautifying a building requires a huge amount of money which is not worthwhile at all. There are many examples where investments in artistic design lead to construction
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as the collapse of 'Rana Plaza' which was a major failure due to poor construction while the building looked outstanding visually. Besides
, in case of such
engineering failure, general people often blame engineers for not following design instructions properly while the truth is they are told to make it visually beautiful instead
of caring much about safety.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that buildings
should be safe places to live, work or do other activities. So engineers should be more concerned about designing safe structures instead
of investing much time in making them beautiful.Submitted by barson.mithun392 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite