It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

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common trend to construct structures with complex designs in order to create scenic beauty which is often not necessary till the structure serves its own purpose. Personally, I completely agree with that and
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will be reasoning my stands in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, each of the constructions has a sole objective to facilitate
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human beings.
For instance
, residential
buildings
are built to provide habitats for individuals whereas, some
buildings
are used as schools, colleges or universities to provide educational facilities.
Therefore
, while designing these
buildings
, engineers should be concerned about whether the structure will fit the amenities required to live or to learn rather than how to enhance the outlook of the building. In fact, sometimes the beauty of a building may bring hassles,
such
as the beauty of Dhaka University pools a huge amount of people to visit it the crowd disturbs the calmness which is a prerequisite of an academic institution. Another point worth mentioning is that beautifying a building requires a huge amount of money which is not worthwhile at all. There are many examples where investments in artistic design lead to
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building poorly that it could not sustain for a longer time
such
as the collapse of 'Rana Plaza' which was a major failure due to poor construction while the building looked outstanding visually.
Besides
, in case of
such
engineering failure, general people often blame engineers for not following design instructions properly while the truth is they are told to make it visually beautiful
instead
of caring much about safety. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that
buildings
should be safe places to live, work or do other activities. So engineers should be more concerned about designing safe structures
instead
of investing much time in making them beautiful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • prioritize
  • building design
  • meet the needs
  • occupants
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • landmarks
  • symbolize
  • balance
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