You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I have recently organized an all-day meeting for the "Sunshine" company, which took place in your hotel. I was satisfied with the services you gave. The participants of the meeting had a productive day and enjoyed their stay. They said the waiters were kind, friendly and worked extremely fast.
Moreover
, the place was clean and a background classic sound was playing in a relaxing way. Besides
, the temperature of the hall room and meeting rooms was warm. However
, they had a tiny problem with the food
.
Let me explain what was specifically unsatisfying about food
. Most participants told that the lunch was a bit spicy and salty. Prior to that, dinner didn't feel fresh, probably because some of the ingredients which were used had been old. On the other hand
, breakfast was perfectly exquisite, the way how some food
was cooked in a different way was considerate of your hotel.
Would you kindly let your chef of the hotel know to add less salt and spicy seasons.
Change the punctuation
?
Besides
, please do control the freshness of the food
you get.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
NigorakhonSubmitted by Ozy_boy on
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