Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believes that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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certainly undeniable that

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of schooling is essential

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any stage of life. The benefits of learning are obvious as life has become easier and

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. A growing number of advocates state that

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continuing study after finishing college or university is the best way to become

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in life.

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the rest opposes it by saying that it is

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preferable to get

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in a job

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after

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conclusion, I will discuss both sides. On the one

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there could be a myriad of reasons why some people say that

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after college or university can make a difference to create a successful path for

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studying in a higher education institute, leading to a professional job. A good example to explain

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like Japan,

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consist

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courses

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after

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when their youth continue their study after that they become practical based and professional.

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higher education.

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coronavirus would be impossible if

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founders never studied after

school

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, taking a look at the flip side some might feel that it would be beneficial to start a job after closing

school

. Academic qualifications are required in many professions.

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relevant degree.

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without having their professional

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no matter how

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they are. For

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, people looking to build their

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in the professions mentioned above. In conclusion, having explored both

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of view, I think the importance of

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of education is determined by the career choices of people . Those who want to

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their careers in business or computer programming are better off starting to work fresh out of

school

or ones willing to become doctors or teachers should complete their relevant courses before their professional lives begin.