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Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

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The world changes by benefits of developed
technology
 but at present,some of these technological devices
such
 as smartphones and the Internet would be hard to
use
 for a proportion of old
people
. Overall,
technology
 would be beneficial
also
 for them
by
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 advanced
healthcare
 devices and applications and we may provide adaptation with new software which is easy to
use
 and understandable for especially elderly ones. Developed technologies
such
 as smart bands and
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special
speacial
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special
healthcare
 applications offering
public
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 to track their body condition and report
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dangerous
dangerious
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dangerous
 situations to owners. Those are not only counting heartbeats as programmed to report but
also
 keeping calculated blood oxygen levels and the smartest ones send information to officers about your condition in struggle times
such
 as after involving in a traffic accident. To consider that, with an easy-to-
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use use
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 device which could be more understandable by the elderly,
people
 can
use
 the
healthcare
 benefits
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 advanced
technology
.
Moreover
, some old
people
 don't struggle with understanding
technology
, they just can't read properly because they have
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 or they struggle with adapting to these
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technologies
technolgies
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technologies
 but the
technology
 doesn't have to be difficult or complex. With the volunteers, we can provide
to
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elderlies by giving information about how to
use
 special
diveces
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devices
 which include symbols rather than words which are created especially for them with face to face
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communication
comminication
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communication
. To sum up,
the
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technology
 is created by
people
 to publics' serve human beings'
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welfare
wellfare
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welfare
such
 as
healthcare
. Consider that, the same
people
 who develop the
technology
such
 as engineers, designers and
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software
sorfware
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software
 programmers can
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create
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creat
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create
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 special
divaces
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devices
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 for
people
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struggle
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struggle
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 devices
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