The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of housing

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problem nowadays.

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can find a solution. From my point of view , it is quite a logical statement,and I definitely support it. Considering steps that should be taken by governments,there are several ways to work it out.

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social media ,where will be discussed all benefits of living in a village.

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have to pay attention to ways to get to the city from

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,as a lot of citizens won’t lose their jobs because of the moving countryside. So that’s why it is important to make it convenient and inexpensive. Returning again to

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question, governments of the country should provide more vacancy suggestions in the rural areas as

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moved to

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just for getting a well-paid

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opportunities increased,

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would be more willing to move countryside. It would be nice to mention latest poll conducted by

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of the Maharashtra province demonstrated that

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of youths don’t wanna live in a large city,but

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

325 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urbanization
public housing
overcrowding
affordable housing
rent control
property market
infrastructure development
sustainable living
rural-urban migration
real estate regulations
zoning laws
bureaucracy
gentrification
economic disparity
housing policy
social welfare

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The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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