An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people choose to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Contemprorarily

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Contemporary

Contemporarily

, a significant number of

people

have been opting for artificial

body

enhancement rather than natural ones

such

as

an

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exercise.

This

, I think may be due to the fact that

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they want to enhance their beauty to feel confident, and

also

keep up with the fashion world.

However

, in my opinion,

this

practice can be detrimental to the health of the individual, and

also

a bad example to

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young adults.

To begin

with, there has been

this

trend where an increasing number of

people

are choosing plastic surgery, which is done either on the breast or the buttocks.

This

may arise because of

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of confidence in one's

natural

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body

.

For example

, a lady who loves to wear dresses which are tight on her

body

would

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in

this

practice to get an hourglass shape.

Furthermore

, some do so in order to look like a celebrity they adore.

People

can go the extra mile to change some

part

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of their

body

just to resemble a famous personality.

Nonetheless

,

this

, I think, has both positive and negative

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effects

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.

People

can benefit from

this

surgery by getting the

body

shape they want, which helps boost their self-confidence.

Conversely

,

this

can be detrimental to the individual's health, in that, lots of chemicals and other toxic substances are used to achieve

this

.

For instance

, these

people

can be at risk of getting cancer since they are exposed to some hazardous substances. In conclusion,

although

plastic surgery can be beneficial to an individual, I think

that is

a negative breakthrough because of its health implications and

also

, the tendency of teenagers

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lower self-esteem due to the fact that

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they do not have a nice

body

shape in comparison with an individual who has enhanced how she looks.