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There are different ways of learning about the world : through the mass media,books,traveling,visiting museums , meeting other people, etc.Which way do you prefer to learn about the world?

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Learning is one thing that we will do all our life. Once Benjamin Franklin said : “An investment in knowledge always pays the best interest “ and he was definitely right. Every day and every minute we learn something , something new to us.
However
, we have a lot of different
ways
 to learn about the world
such
 as going to the museum every week or watching
cultures
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 videos on YouTube , etc. Definitely, we can’t learn all
this
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 things,
however
 , we have enough time to learn a bigger part of
it
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. I consider
,
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 if you will
use
 only one way to learn you never will know those things that guy
which
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who
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use
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 all
this
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ways
 will know.And I always repeat
this
 idiom in my thoughts when I am tired «You can never be overdressed or overeducated» and after
that
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 I start doing something again. Can I give you advice? If you want to know as much as possible,
use
 all
ways
 in your education.You can change it or create your own or anything else,but please never stop,continue discovering the world. In my
education
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 I usually
use
ways
 like reading books ,
traveling
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travelling
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, going to museums and meeting other people.
First
 of all, it makes me happy.
Secondly
,If I am bored
of
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doing
this
,I always change it.And
finally
,I am really passionate about trying something new if it can help me in the future. To sum it up,I really wish you to
finally
 discover your own world in different
ways
.
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