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Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country’s financial resources. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

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The
unemployment
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 stream in some countries makes the governments create a public
system
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 to pay
money
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 to every unemployeds continuously.
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, there are a lot of critics who disagree with
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 decision because they say
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system
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 cause destroys the financial resources of the nation due to decreasing in people's motivation for working.
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 of all, the government should be considered an organization that has a number of responsibilities to improve people's well-being.
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, one of the most important problems that governments are faced is
unemployment
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.
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, creating a
system
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 for paying
money
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 to the people who lose their jobs or are between jobs, can be a wise decision because
unemployment
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 is a major social disorder that can have a large number of consequences.
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, a worker who lost his job has to tackle a lot of difficulties to make a living , so, it is possible that he starts doing illegal activities for making
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.
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,
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 a financial
system
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 definitely has a massive negative impact on the government's resources.
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,
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 regular payment causes an immense amount of receivers to have not enough motive to look for or find a new job.
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,
this
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 is not a financial solution to struggling with
unemployment
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. In my, opinion, governments can allocate many interest-free loans to create jobs through entrepreneurs. In conclusion, all the treatments that are considered by national organizations, undoubtedly have both positive and negative effects on society or other parts like the economy.
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, spending directly
money
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 on the unemployed or job seekers perhaps can be the
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 choice, which is why its negative consequences surely are as much as the expectations.
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