You have borrowed something from you friend, and it got damaged. Write a letter to a friend 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue.

Dear Pooja, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about damage to the rear side of the
car
mirror. I know your dad gifted you
this
car
on your birthday, and it’s so special for you. I am sorry for damaging your
car
.
This
incident happened
last
week when I was travelling for work during rush hour. There was
lot
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of
trrafic
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traffic
terrific
,
car
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behind me just cut your
car
and hit
rear
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the rear
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side of
mirror
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. There is no other structural damage to
car
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the car
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, only
mirror
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was shattered into pieces. I have already scheduled
appointment
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this
weekend to fix it
in
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authorized
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dealer itself,
this
will make sure
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original
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orginal
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original
parts are replaced with
manfacture
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manufacture
. I should get the
car
same
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day and return to you by
same
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evening. I am planning to pay
total
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amount
of
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this
repair, and I would like to apologize to you
this
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happened. Your friend tina
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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