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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern times, with the advent of renewable
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, many countries are utilising them more than conventional
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 as coal, oil and natural gas. In my opinion, it is a positive development as it has many benefits
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 as reduction of carbon emissions,and environment friendly. In
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 as coal, oil and natural gas.
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, fossil fuels are limited and their extensive use may lead to the extinction of raw materials.
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, these resources are the main cause of the creation of carbon footprints which eventually lead to environmental pollution thereby, deteriorating the climate and the living planet. Due to these demerits, nowadays many developed and developing nations are switching to the alternative source of
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 as the main source.
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, wind and solar
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 are freely available and are unlimited resources
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, there is no chance of the extinction of renewable
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 means there is no restriction on utilising naturally available
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. On top of that, renewable
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 are environment friendly which is considered the main criterion in
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 contemporary era.
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, many developed countries are manufacturing automobiles to run on electricity rather than using fossil fuels which
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 reduces pollution. In conclusion, the utilisation of alternative
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 is considered a positive trend as it has numerous advantages
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 as the reduction of pollution, and the saving of fossil fuels. More nations should adopt
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 technology in order to save the planet for future generations.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fossil fuels
  • Renewable energy
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Economic benefits
  • Energy security
  • Energy dependency
  • Infrastructure investment
  • Intermittent nature
  • Sustainable development
  • Technological innovation
  • Renewable energy sector
  • Pollution reduction
  • Job creation
  • Energy diversification
  • Global energy market
  • Geopolitical tensions
  • Supply chain disruptions
  • Energy storage systems
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