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Traffic congestion its causes and preventive measures

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In the present world, vehicle
congetion
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congestion
 in
city
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the city
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area
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areas
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 is increasing at an alarming rate. There are many reasons contributing to
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traffic
trffic
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traffic
jam
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jams
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 and I will be explaining some of those reasons along with probable solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
increased
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 number of vehicles on the roads is the consequence of
increased
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the increased
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city
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 dwellers.
For example
, here in
the
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Dhaka
city
, each day thousands of people come from
suburb
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 areas in the quest
of
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 livelihood and for their transportation along with regular commuters number of buses
are
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 surging in the
city
 while roads are not
spcious
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spacious
 enough to let all the transport run smoothly.
Consequently
, during
the
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rush hour, all the transports get
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stuck
stucked
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stuck
 for hours. Another point worth mentioning is that in many countries, there
are
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 either no
traffic
 rules at all or simply drivers do not pay heed to rules due to
lack
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 of monitoring.
Therefore
, buses and cars mostly get stuck
in
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 major road intersection points as no driver is eager to stop for a while to make room for passing vehicles coming from
perpendicular
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a perpendicular
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direction
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directions
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.
As a result
, transports heading towards different
direction
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directions
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 can not move for a long time which causes almost
never ending
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traffic
 congestion throughout the
city
.
However
, the problem of
traffic
jam
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jams
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 can be solved
through
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by
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 constructing flyovers over some of the major routes so that vehicles can pass through without blocking roads. Despite
of
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such
 structural
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solutions
soultions
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solutions
,
government
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the government
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 need to be strict with
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traffic-related
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traffic related
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 rules so that no one can easily violet any regulations resulting
to
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traffic
 jam.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • gridlock
  • urbanization
  • vehicle ownership
  • infrastructure
  • public transport systems
  • air pollution
  • urban heat island effect
  • economic costs
  • lost productivity
  • quality of life
  • public transport promotion
  • carpooling
  • rideshare initiatives
  • traffic management
  • congestion charging
  • traffic light synchronization
  • road infrastructure
  • cycling
  • pedestrian zones
  • smart city technologies
  • real-time traffic monitoring
  • electric and hybrid vehicles
  • sustainability
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