In some countries, schools are open late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Educational institutions in some countries are kept open beyond their closing hours so that children can be taken care of when their parents are busy.

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are the safety of the child and

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benefits to the families,

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the potential drawbacks are the decrease in parental guidance.In my opinion. It is true, that keeping children in school is safer and more economical. Keeping them under the vigilance of a known teacher or supervisor ensures safety.

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that ,it is better than hiring an unknown person or keeping them in a daycare facility where people generally lack responsibility.

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benefits for the parents because

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allows the possibility for the mother to pursue a career and not get busy with childcare activities. The household gets a double income source when both the mother and the father are earning.

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, previously only the males would work but

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even the women can earn a living, which means that the family can upgrade their living significantly.

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, there are disadvantages like poor bonding and reduction in parental influence. Decreased time spent with their kin and more time spent at school can result in the weakening of bonds and relations.

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results in issues later in adulthood. Recent studies have demonstrated that most adults who have psychological problems are those who

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poor bonds with their kin during childhood.

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, the decreased influence of parents on them can make them indulge in inappropriate activities and may detract them from academics.

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, teenagers who come from broken families tend to develop a predisposition to abuse drugs and commit offensive acts. In conclusion,

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there are several advantages of

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development ,there are a fair number of disadvantages too. The benefits are good security and better finances,

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the drawbacks are poor interaction within the family and reduced guidance. In my opinion.