The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between

1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs present information about the proportion of three categories of electrical household appliances in a country, and the duration of housework in a family during a
period
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from 1920 to 2019.
It is clear that
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all the percentages of appliances saw significant growth,
while
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the number of hours of weekly housework time saw a marked decline during the
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shown.
According to
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the first line graph, washing machines were the most important appliances in 1920, followed by a moderate increase to 73 in 1919, despite a dip between 1960 and 2000. The second-most important appliance in 1920 was vacuum cleaners, with a consistent rising until 2000 that remained consistent in the
last
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20 years in question. A significant increase can be seen in the figure for the refrigerator, from a negligible number in 1920 to 100 in 1980 and remained unchanged in the
last
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40 years of the
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in question. Looking at the second graph, the number of weekly housework hours in one family declined consistently from 50 in 1920 to approximately 10 in 2019, with a dramatic reduction during the
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from 1920 to 1960, followed by a gradual decline by the end of the
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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