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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree.

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To maintain success, the
company
 must have a distinctive
product
 in the market.
However
, a certain number of people believe
that is
 a key principle of triumph in the
business
. I do not agree with
this
 view, whereas many external factors
such
 as marketing and the cost of the
product
 have a big role in achievement, and hard work and determination of employees are
also
 substantial parts of the popular the
company
.
First
 and foremost, the reason behind the unique
product
 is not only a particular way to achieve success in the
business
 is to the competition in the marketplace.
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Because
, a plenty number of
company
, is coming to a unique
product
 in the market. Still, they are not
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 in
this
 particular thing because they do not maintain the services after launching the exceptionally good. They are not looking at the cost of the
product
 because everyone cannot get the
product
 if they desire to buy them.
Second
 but not least, the
company
's workers
also
 indicate significant contribution to the promotion of
business
 because it will be determined that every person in the
company
 is contributing to the
company
 who is working as patiently. If the
company
's owners do not care
to
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 the employers and do not give a salary as well as respect their work,
then
 if owners launch a rare
product
 in the market,
than
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 they will not succeed. To illustrate, A big tech-iPhones
company
 advocate
the
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employer
emplyoer
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employees
 to give more salary and maintain
the
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 happy workplace.
Thus
, without the role of workers, they cannot succeed in the
business
. In conclusion, strong features
also
 contribute for the achieve victory in the work,
such
 as good services, cost reduction strategy, a happy workplace, and maintaining the stability of the
product
.
Therefore
, we cannot argue that the only way to achieve
this
 in the
business
 is by launching a unique
product
.
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