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Nowadays, more and more university students choose to study abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#university #students #study
Many teenagers prefer to receive an education in another
country
 to enhance their knowledge. Some
people
 think that studying abroad can provide beneficial skills and radical experience.
However
, others argue that
new
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 atmosphere can advance some demerits. In my opinion, international relations will develop communication skills, as well as, will create new opportunities. On the one hand,
students
 have
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 desire to
study
 far from their hometown because they are in a high financial position. All
people
 are considered international and foreign
,
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 when they leave their
country
.
Therefore
, studying overseas can lead to many
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difficulties
dificulties
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difficulties
, because the adaption of
the
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 new culture, food and foreign
people
 can seem stressful.
For instance
 ,there are strict nationalities
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 define several rules, which in its turn does not permit
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 live openly. Iran has qualified education and
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 of
students
 reach to
study
 there.
However
, all female
students
 must wear special clothes not to violate
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certain rules.
On the other hand
, international education can contain compound
curriculum
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, which
are
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 not available in some
country
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countries
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. Those
students
 who have concurrent priorities and superior knowledge
,
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 can be provided
scholarship
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 as well as
study
 without tuition.
Consequently
,
to live
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 and
study
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 in a foreign
country
 can be harmful
for
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 those
people
 who are more sensitive. If
student
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is not confirm
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 his/her concept, he/she will have anxiety and depression. To conclude, if
student
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 is ready to
study
 abroad both mentally and
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financially
financally
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financially
, it will
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strengths
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the strengths
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 of
certain
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individual
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.
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