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some universities deduct mark on a student's work if it is given late. what is your opinion? What alternative actions do you recommend to take

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Many universities underestimate the result of a
student
's
work
 if it was passed after the deadline. I believe that
this
 is the right method of evaluation because all students must have the same
time
 to do the task.
Firstly
, it is important to punish works that are late by deducting marks
otherwise
 it will be not fair if works that are late will be assessed the same because there are specially allotted times to pass it.
For example
, it will be wrong if the
student
 who has done his research before the deadline, and the
student
 who passed it late are been assessed the same.
Also
, punishment for being late
,
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 teaches the
student
 to do everything on
time
 and improves their
time
 management skills. Which is a very important skill in university and life generally. Supposing it's necessary to do alternative actions for the students, I would like to give extra
work
 to a
student
 who is late,
therefore
 it will motivate them to pass their task before the deadline.
For example
, if a
student
 passes his research late, the teacher gives him extra
work
, and if he does not do it, the teacher will underestimate him or even will not accept his research. In conclusion, it is important to discipline students to pass all of their tasks on
time
 by deducting marks or giving extra
work
 for them.
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