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Everyone should stay in school untill they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#school #untill #age
We live in an age when it is believed that individuals are highly recommended to leave an educational institution
such
 as
school
 only at the age of 18. I strongly
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agree
 with the motion, due to the significance of subjects taught at schools for
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future job prospects and essential social skills, that can only be cultivated in a community formed there.
However
,
such
 topics never fail to divide people in their opinion, and as there are always two sides of the same coin, in
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aspects
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aspects
 to reach a reasonable conclusion. On the one hand,
school
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 is a place where students are provided with the
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opportunity
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opportunity
 to obtain new exciting
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 about anything in the world. There is no doubt, the facility's curriculum is getting even more
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versatile
 with every passing day, which allows students to broaden their horizons and possess valuable basic information on various issues.
In addition
, one of the main goals of
school
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 is to train
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adolescents
adolecents
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adolescents
 with particular communicational skills that will eventually assist them in the smooth society
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integration
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integration
 process.
On the other hand
, in our modern society, schools are occasionally perceived as something outdated, especially due to the fact that some
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 taught,
such
 as algebra or biology, have already lost their importance for employers considering
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candidates
cadidates
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candidates
 for an occupation,
thus
 applicants with excellent marks in
this
 type of subjects are no longer in
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high demand in the current labour market,
therefore
 that could be considered as a complete waste of time to stay at
school
 to continue learning something that would be of no use in the future.
Moreover
, nowadays a lot of human beings agree that social skills acquired in local communities could be
similarly
 developed in a more effective way by means of children getting involved in new fascinating
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extra curriculum
extra-curriculum
extracurriculum
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extracurricular
 activities and hobbies, including arts, music and,
last
 but not least, sports. Taking into consideration everything mentioned above, I am firmly convinced that even the age of 18 is way too early to force the
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younger
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younger
 generation
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 the real world, as childhood is only given
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 once and we should let children enjoy
this
, probably, sweetest period of their lives for as long as possible, without trying to make them grow up drastically and putting additional physical and emotional pressure.
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