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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. how do you agree with this statement

#countries #languages #people
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playing with a tablet in the waiting area as well as during anaesthesia induction has a positive impact on the child intra-operatively and in the postoperative care unit by decreasing the chance of occurrence
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midazolam and a
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non- pharmacological
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 two different interventions; playing with a tablet and watching
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television to deliver
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anaesthesia.
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, to adopt a method that could be a standard for using to decrease preoperative anxiety in children.
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 a method which
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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