Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In these days and age, schools have become the maximum crucial institutions that provide
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with a proper education that will allow them to develop.
However
, there is an increasing number of reported bullying cases that happened inside in
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system. In my opinion, it depends on
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upbringing and
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of social media.
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measures are applied at the right time. On the one hand, there
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two causes of children why
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bullying
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related to
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society.
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they grow up in an unsafe place where there
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harmful deeds. For
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, offspring who are living in a broken family will usually see both of their parents
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hit each other.
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attitude and express their
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to friends and
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delinquency.
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, youngsters get
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bad behaviour from
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internet websites.
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negative thing. Scion who
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only
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horror movies
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may get some action and will try to
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.
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system. There is one solution
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education students
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supplementing some material related to how to respect others and very well
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school.
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way, students can understand and realize human rights.
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using websites.
This
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movies, parents can explain and give a piece of advice on the reason why do not allow to watch it. In conclusion, the environment and
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technology would the main reason why kids commit anxiety
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their friends.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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