Some students nowadays prefer to study online through online courses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning online?

In recent years, most
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tasks were changed because of the Internet. Teachers started teaching
students
through online classes. Some people believe that going to
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school is
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effective way of studying. As far as I am concerned, I think studying on
campus
is better. Both studying on
campus
and online studying have some similarities.
Firstly
,
students
can gain knowledge from both methods, since teachers teach
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content.
Then
, they
also
can make friends in class, because they always have
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discussion
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to talk about issues, questions and so on, which can help them find friends who have the same interests.
However
, learning on
campus
is still very different from online studying.
First
of all, the disappearance of physical contact among
students
creates a lower level of communication and participation, but studying on
campus
can avoid
this
problem and have
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discussion in the classroom, which can widen the perspective of
students
and enhance their teamwork
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.
Moreover
,
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on
campus
allows
students
to experience different local cultures, languages and so on.
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that the graduates have more competitive in the job market, because these
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attention.
Besides
, online study is flexible in terms of time and location, so
students
can study anywhere with internet access, and
this
saves a lot of money in terms of housing and commuting,
On the other hand
,
students
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on
campus
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build their own lifestyles. Because they do not live with their parents anymore, so many problems in life they have to solve by themselves, which helps them to be more independent. At the same time,
students
can exchange problems they encounter in their studies and lives with their classmates at any time in real life. All in all, There are benefits to studying online, but for
students
, it is better for them to study at school
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online courses
  • flexibility
  • scheduling
  • access
  • wide range
  • learn at your own pace
  • lower costs
  • self-discipline
  • time management skills
  • geographical restrictions
  • limited face-to-face interaction
  • hands-on experience
  • distractions
  • self-motivation
  • discipline
  • networking opportunities
  • dependence on technology
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