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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear Catherine, I am one of the participants coming from India for the monthly training programme in the UK related to Culture and Art. I am
also
 aware that you are looking for a social events organiser for
this
 course. I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in the same. It would be great if you could provide more details about the eligibility criteria and experience
that is
 required for the role.
Further
, information related to timings, travelling or any other aspect that would be necessary for the job would be helpful for initial preparations. I would like to inform you that I have prior experience organising many social events
such
 as blood donation camps, polio campaigns and other programmes at the college level.
Moreover
, I have
also
 done a diploma in social activities after my graduation.
Therefore
, I would request you to consider me as one of the suitable candidates for the upcoming event. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sneha
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