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It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

#movie #theater #neighborhood #support #plan
The catalogue demonstrates the hobbies taken up by elder people residing in the countryside and metropolitan field.
Firstly
, it can be viewed that in 1990, 61% of adults prefered reading in urban
areas
 whereas 71% of youngsters participated in rural
areas
.
Then
 in the
next
 two decades majority was the same. The proportion of photography changed with time it was 7% in 1990 whereas 14% in rural
areas
. Later on, the percentage in 2010 increased in both rural and urban
areas
.
Secondly
, considering animated play and playing in rural
areas
 the percentage is slightly higher than that of urban
areas
 which
is
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 18% and 26%. In 2010 the hobby animated play in urban
areas
 stood at 10% but in rural
areas
 was 14% which was higher. The ratio of playing remained constant in both years. In conclusion, it is clearly observed maximum proportion was noticed in rural
areas
 than that in urban
areas
 in the given time period. Most of the adults chose reading as their activity in both the rural and urban
areas
.
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