You bought a laptop while you were travelling abroad. When you reached your native country you realised that some items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the representative of the company. In your letter, give details of the laptop and from where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir, I write in reference to the laptop I recently bought from your apple store located in California. I was on vacation there and during my visit to the Great Mall, I saw

this

laptop on the display window of your store and it had my attention.

Therefore

, I instantly decided to purchase it for my wife for our 10th wedding anniversary gift. Unfortunately, when my wife opened the box after I returned to my native country, she observed that the laptop's charger is missing from the box. It was a very shameful moment for me.

Nevertheless

, I regret to say, I am not completely satisfied with my purchase. I would appreciate it if you could look into

this

matter at your earliest convenience and make a contact with your store's outlet manager, located nearby me and request him to send me its missing charger.

Furthermore

, I would

also

like to receive a full refund through an online transfer if possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Leo

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