Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together.

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Dear Emma, I am writing to you, in order to answer your request due to learning a new sport in my city.
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of all, I would like to thank you that you are asking me to give you some advice;
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, I believe that one of the best fields for you to start is Tennis. I think ABC complex could be a good suggestion for you to register because it is one the nearest international sports complex near to your house. As I know you always tend to learn a new field of sport, so in
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you can access any kind of sport
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. Another reason that makes me suggest tennis is you eager to watch its Olympic competition every 4th year. As far as I
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you had been playing Badminton since highschool time, In
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situation, you are a little familiar with
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kind of sports major.
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, you do not need to worry as I have a shared booklet for playing rules and regulations to get familiar with its basics. As a final point, I have been playing Tennis at ABC complex for 2 years it would be entertaining for both of us to play and learn it together there,
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I was forgetting to write to you about dressing code; you should buy suitable clothes and shoes, which are available in the store after the entrance hall at a reasonable price. If you need more details do not hesitate to ask me. Best wishes, Arezoo
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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