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The provided diagram illustrates the process of
plastic
 bottles being recycled. Overall, there are nine stages in the process, starting with throwing
this
 particular type of litter to a corresponding trash bin as a part of the waste sorting, essential for environmental protection, to a step of producing end products from recycled material. As is presented, in the
first
 five stages, individuals are obliged to put the
plastic
 bottles in an appropriate can, after which they are transported by a specialized truck to a recycling
center
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, where employees are required to thoroughly examine each and every bottle,
therefore
 degradable
plastic
 litter can be identified. Following
this
, bottles suitable for recycling are compressed into blocks and
subsequently
 crushed. A glance at the diagram reveals that in the
last
 4 stages, the crushed material is washed and
plastic
 pellets are produced. As is observed, the pellets are
then
 heated in order to form a raw material.
Finally
, the carefully packed raw material is sent out to various plants and workshops with the purpose of
further
 manufacturing of final items.
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