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Academic Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

For some
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, learning a foreign
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 is needed when
we
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 want to
travel
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 or
work
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 in a foreign
country
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. These are not the only
reasons
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 why someone should learn a foreign
language
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, said others. I believe that
people
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 should learn a foreign
language
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 not only for
work
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 or
travel
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 to other countries. The
reasons
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 why I support
this
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 view will be explained
furthermore
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 in the essay. Learning a foreign
language
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 only when we want to
travel
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 or
work
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 in a foreign
country
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 for me is like showing
unopened
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an unopened
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minded
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 to a wide range of knowledge.
Language
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 is
the
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 essential tool for communicating with others.
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, learning a new
language
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 will allow us to have new friends from around the world. And when we can make new friends, we
also
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 open a new
opportunity
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opportunities
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 in any aspect of life,
such
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 as education, or even marriage. On the one hand, I agree that there are so many
reasons
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 to learn a foreign
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 other than only for
work
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 or
travel
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 to
foreign
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country
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. As I mentioned before, we can learn a new
language
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 to build new chances
for
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 our life.
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, if we want to study overseas, the
first
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 thing that we need to master is the
language
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 of the
country
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. After that, we surely can achieve higher education. Another reason that I found why some
people
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 learn a foreign
language
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 is
because
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that
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 they want to meet their idol someday,
then
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 they can have a good
chit chat
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 with them. To conclude, learning a foreign
language
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 is not only when
people
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 want to
travel
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 or
work
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 in a foreign
country
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. There are many
reasons
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 other than that. And I think it is very acceptable for anyone to learn a new
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with
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for
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their
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apply
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personal
reasons
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 other than to
travel
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 or to
work
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.

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