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Some people think painting and drawing are as important as other subjects, they should be compulsory in the high school education. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some
people
 think painting and drawing are as important as other
subjects
, they should be compulsory in
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high
school
 education. Do you agree or disagree with
this
 opinion? In
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high
school
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 there are many
subjects
 and some
people
 think that studying and attending art
lessons
 should be obligatory as other
lessons
. I completely disagree with
this
 statement because for most
people
 it could be wasting
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their
thier
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their
time
 rather than studying other more important
subjects
. On the one hand, for students who are studying in junior grade and in
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secondary
school
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 it might be useful because they can create something from scratch by using their imaginations. In fact, art
lessons
 are so important for pupils because it helps them to practise
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their
thier
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their
 creativity many times .
In addition
, there can be some students who are going to major in many different spheres which requires creativity for those it could be
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great opportunity.
On the other hand
, nowadays
people
 are becoming more competitive and
that is
 why they are studying all
subjects
 that they need because of the fact that there will not be any need to study those
subjects
 which are not related to
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their
thier
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their
 future profession.
Moreover
, there is a big probability to waste
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their
thier
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time
, as
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 mentioned before others can get the start
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more quickly because while studying unnecessary
subjects
 other
people
 can practise more and get much higher results. On top
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 , for most
people
 especially
for
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high
school
 students it may seem boring to draw and paint something. I strongly agree with
this
 because we spend our valuable
time
by
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drawing which cannot make us
to
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become a professional. In conclusion, spending
time
on
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making a drawing is boring and is not the most vital part of my life and because of
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 I reckon that we should give a chance to seniors and make it optional to choose to attend
such
 kinds of
lessons
.
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