Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems.

Environmental

problem

is one of the most important problems that many countries face.

However

, whether or not the main

environment

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problem

is the loss of

plants

and

animals

nowadays is a

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controversial

controvercial

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controversial

issue. In my opinion, there are lots of reasons

cause

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environmental

problem

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problems

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. It is obvious that some people think that

loss

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the loss

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of

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of

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particular species of

plants

animals

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and animals

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affect

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environment

. That means with human

destroy

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plants

and

animals

, the

environment

become

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more and more bad

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worse and worse

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.

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,

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of cities expand their area,

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government cutting

forest

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forests

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and hunting

animals

so that

cause

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has changed. Like

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the Amazon

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field

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,

,

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plenty of

rainforest

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rainforests

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are

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destroyed

destroied

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destroyed

cause

the temperature

increasing

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.

Therefore

, if people can protect

forest

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forests

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and

animals

, the environmental

problem

would be resolved.

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, others,

they

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believe in these days the more

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important

improtant

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important

issue of

environment

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the environment

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is

pollution

.

Such

as air

pollution

and water

pollution

. Due to

developing

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economy, more and more

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countries

countires

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countries

need to create lots of factories.

For instance

, using

ciremic

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ceramic

for infrashtration

cause

air

pollution

, using water for printing clothing

cause

water

pollution

, etc. The government of these nations focus on their GDP

ignore

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the

environment

, especially

developing

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in developing

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countries. Thereby, the

pollution

would impact people’s health. I believe that there are

lot

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of environmental problems nowadays. Including

pollution

and

destory

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destroy

plants

and

animals

. All these problems should

to

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be noticed by all the countries. So the most important thing is all the governments need to

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know

now

konw

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know

protect

environment

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can play a

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critical

crucial

cricical

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crucial

role. In conclusion, protecting

environment

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is

a

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important subject that

the

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people all over the world need to learn and do it

altogether

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all together

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.