A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Abhishek, I hope you are doing well, and it is good to know that you are thinking of visiting one of the camping sites in Himachal. I am very happy that you asked for my advice.
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, the location you are thinking of is mesmerizing, it has a plethora of adventurous sports available there.
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, it has breathtaking sunset and sunrise views plus fascinating flora and fauna, from which you can hardly take your eyes off,
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trip is highly recommended by me. Well, despite the location's beauty, it has a few drawbacks as well, the road going down to the camp is narrow, and the lane is a bit rocky too.
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, there's no road for cars to reach there,
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, you ought to park five kilometres away from it in a number of paid parking. I wish, I could join you on
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trip
on the contrary
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got no days off
next
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month,
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, a mid-year review is in line at the office,
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, hardly would get time. But I wish to join you
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year, brother. I hope
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information will help you a bit. Do share your photographs of there with me. Best Regards, Arshdeep Kaur
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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