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In some countries, m any more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Education
 is the backbone of a nation. To build a better country,
people
 must have to get proper
education
 and the
government
 should be monitoring the
education
 system so that everyone can get opportunities. Upcoming paragraph, I will illustrate why the
education
 system should be controlled by the
government
 of that country
instead
 of a private organization.
Firstly
, the
government
 can understand what type of
education
 system have to impose depending on the demand of the situation of that time.
However
, private organizations can not identify the sort of change they have to change for the greater interest of the nation because they are not in the group of policy making.
For example
, the Chinese
government
 understood that technical
education
 is very prominent in the modern world.
Therefore
, he decided to teach his student about technical subjects so that they could contribute to their economy to a greater extent. And now we see the result in our eyes that the Chinese are the world's number one economic country in the world.
Furthermore
, the
government
 faces fewer difficulties to impose new things in different sectors than private organizations because they can handle it very smartly.
Government
 can persuade their
people
 to do something whereas nongovernment companies can not do it.
For instance
, South Korean
people
 must take two years of military training within thirty years old for their safety during the war. If
this
 is imposed by any nongovernment organization,
people
 can not obey their command.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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