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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

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, there are a few measures that could be taken by authorities and people to overcome
this
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 problem,
firstly
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, it has been seen that many individuals are burning garbage plastic to get rid of that which affects nature ,
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 of that, they have better an option
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 as a start reutilizing those bags for some other work.
for example
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, in India, there is a village name called Cholapur where locals always keep plastic in their pockets when they go for buying vegetables, not only they are utilising plastic bags but
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 they are helping the environment by not throwing or burning them.
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, it has the responsibility of the government as well that, the recycling system should be there in each region, and take responsibility for collecting the garbage from each home,
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, nobody will throw these items on road or outside of the house and no animals will die by eating them. Perhaps, it could be recycled in form of different products like chairs, tables and toys. Clearly, taking just a few steps together has a great chance of resolving the major damage that plastics have done to nature.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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