The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
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The given map illustrates the layout of construction in a
city
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hospital in the years of 2007 and 2010. In 2007, the
city
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hospital, a rectangular area, was surrounded by a ringroad, with an entrance on the south side of the
road
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leading toward a large expanse of
car
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park accessible for both hospital staff and the public. Another entrance right on the south toward a narrow hospital
road
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with six bus stops on each side of the
road
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. There was a
city
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road
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intersecting with the hospital
road
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from west to east. Since
then
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,
this
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region has altered considerably ableit to two unchanged characteristics: the main construction(
city
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hospital), its ring
road
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and
city
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road
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. The previous
car
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park was divided into two separate parking lot: a public
car
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park was established on the east side of the rotary and another staff-only
car
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parking area remained the same location. On the east of hospital
road
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was a lager bus station where the original bus stops are demolished, with the station likned by two intersections on the north and south ends of the hospital
road
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.
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,
this
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area maintained its main functions:accomodating the same number of patients and providing medical treatment, but with improved traffic networks.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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