You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. write a letter to the editor of the magazine.In your letter . correct the information the article . explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information . suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to you regarding you have some mistake in your magazine about my home town. Let me discuss
this
issue.
To begin
with, my home city is seventy kilometres, not fifty-five and
your
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can be sure about
this
topic.
Although
, for some tourists is
no
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not
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important but to take a taxi and in the end paying money will be vital for them
also
,
for example
, they should be fixed their time because as you know our city is a completely attractive place.
Moreover
, if you write true, you can find more and more customers. I suggest you before editing and writing any matter, read about that subject.
For instance
, ten years ago one
men
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wrote a book about my town and you can learn a lot of things and after that starts your work. Writing to your reply. Your Faithfully, Said Sam.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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