Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
A group of people thought that the biggest issue human has to cope with is the disappearance of many plants and
animals
, Use synonyms
while
others argued that there are several environmental problems that need to be resolved. I consider the loss of forests and Linking Words
animals
just a small part of the huge natural difficulty.
First of all, there is no argument that one big problem human has to face is losing many plants and creatures Use synonyms
due to
uncontrolled deforestation of landscape and or agriculture. Many wild Linking Words
animals
were hunted illegally; Use synonyms
moreover
, few exist in forests suitable for them to survive. Linking Words
For example
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according to
research done by environmental activists in Australia, wild species had reduced significantly over a decade. If the governments did not give any solution for Linking Words
this
problem, rare Linking Words
animals
would go extinct in less than 20 years.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, I believe that there are several serious issues related to nature that people have to deal with. Global warming, and air and water pollution are the crucial troubles people have to concern about. All of these problems are caused by many reasons and human activities. Linking Words
Firstly
, deforestation contributes a small part; Linking Words
however
, the main reason is the speed of industrialization is too fast. Many manufacturing factories were built, which Linking Words
leads
to a huge amount of greenhouse gas released into the atmosphere. Wrong verb form
led
According to
the estimates by scientists at Cornell University in the US, with the pace of industrialization now, the average temperature of the Earth will reach the mark of 100 degrees Fahrenheit soon. After that, ice in two poles may melt dramatically, leading to unpredictable consequences.
In conclusion, humanity has to find solutions for many environmental troubles Linking Words
such
as losing creatures or global warming. Linking Words
Therefore
, governments need practical action immediately.Linking Words
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