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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in home town. Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days, a lot of people would like to travel around the world and at the same time learn a foreign
language
 but the catch is that without any knowledge about
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different
diffrent
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different
 languages, people are facing problems
such
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.
On the other hand
, some folks prefer to stay at home and continue
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of
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foreign
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a foreign
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language
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languages
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visiting native speakers. In
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the advantage
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 and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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 of learning.
First
 of all,
this
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opportunity
opportinuty
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opportunity
, when students have
option
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 to study a new
language
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outside
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 of
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their home
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 town,
thus
,
a new learners
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new learners
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 will find out some interesting facts about
new
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 culture,
therefore
, it is the fastest way to gain
own
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 speaking or listening skill.
Also
, one of the biggest
advantage
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my opinion
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 of travel education is cross
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 experience and it is
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impossible
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impossible
 to get all of
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 stuff at home.
On the other hand
, the cost of education
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 other countries are way too high and some students cannot afford
this
,
additionally
, they have
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 to get online courses with
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foreign
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foreign
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For example
, there are so many videos on youtube with foreign educators,
therefore
, is not necessary to travel for learning a new
language
. To sum up,
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 a new
language
 is always
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choose
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,
thus
, the intellect of each person is going higher and the question is only in motivation. So, I completely agree with the method of travelling abroad to learn a new way of communication as it will enable
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language
 compared to the other method.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic immersion
  • Cultural integration
  • International network
  • Conversational proficiency
  • Financial burden
  • Homesickness
  • Pedagogical differences
  • Culture shock
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