Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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we will examine how fast
food
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effects
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people
and how it
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effects
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their health. Fast
food
can have a bad effect on
people
's health because the cooks who prepare street
food
do not follow cleanliness. Because fast
food
contain
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many chemicals that have
contain many chemicals that have
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a bad effect on human health, and
then
over time,
people
's bodies become seriously bald, and
this
increases the demand of the young generation for
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ready made
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foods
instead
of natural foods
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the house, and
then
, over the years, the demand for fast
food
, not natural
food
, will increase.
However
people
also
eat what they want according to their time,
that is
, working
people
prefer fast
food
. But fast junk
food
because their time is limited, so they like junk
food
. But fast
food
also
contains natural ingredients, so
people
like and eat fast
food
very much. In conclusion, I'm not against eating fast
food
, but I think it is better to eat natural things
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because fast
food
can not provide enough vitamins for, the immune system, so I think it is better to eat it less often.
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  • Proliferation
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Caloric intake
  • Addictive
  • Nutritional deficit
  • Culinary traditions
  • Healthcare expenditure
  • Immediate gratification
  • Lifestyle diseases
  • Homogenization
  • Processed foods
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