Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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their health. Fast
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can have a bad effect on
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's health because the cooks who prepare street
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do not follow cleanliness. Because fast
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a bad effect on human health, and
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's bodies become seriously bald, and
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increases the demand of the young generation for
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of natural foods
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, over the years, the demand for fast
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, not natural
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eat what they want according to their time,
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, working
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prefer fast
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because their time is limited, so they like junk
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contains natural ingredients, so
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like and eat fast
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very much. In conclusion, I'm not against eating fast
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can not provide enough vitamins for, the immune system, so I think it is better to eat it less often.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proliferation
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Caloric intake
  • Addictive
  • Nutritional deficit
  • Culinary traditions
  • Healthcare expenditure
  • Immediate gratification
  • Lifestyle diseases
  • Homogenization
  • Processed foods
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