You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter •give details of the course •say how the course would be useful •explain how the company could help you do this course.

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Respected Sir, I am writing to express my interest in attending an international course called 'Java Programming,' which I believe can be essential for our following project.

This

beneficial course will be started three times a week from 17 January to 20 February. The tutor, who has been working in Telsa for more than ten years, has a good command of programming.

In addition

, he will be giving us a valid certification that I can train our team members. Learning about

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leads to increasing our knowledge in a wide range of programming languages that can contribute to developing our company's application with state-up-to-date technology.

Moreover

, it seems to be beneficial to accelerate from our competitors. I would be grateful if you allow me to participate in

this

course with one week of paid leave.

Additionally

, it would be great if financial support has been considered. The

last

deadline for enrolling in

this

online training is next week. I look forward to your kind reply. Yours sincerely, Rubina Gill

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure that your ideas are logically organized and connected in a coherent manner throughout the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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