Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The illustrations demonstrate the
number
of people
who visited Ashdown
Museum prior to and after the renovation, and Correct article usage
the Ashdown
also
the levels of satisfaction of visitors
in the same period. In general, the number
of visitors
and level of satisfaction after refurbishment is increased.
The number
of people
who visited the Museum escalated significantly by 22,000, the year after renovation. Regarding the surveys which measured visitors
' satisfaction, the level of dissatisfied visitors
after the reconstruction decreased sharply from 40 per cent to just 15 per cent; however
, the number
of people
who are in the very satisfied category rises more than twice from 15 to 35 per cent.
On the other hand
, while the not responding visitors
’ percentage remained steady at 5, the category of people
who were very dissatisfied experienced a significant decline by half. In addition
, the proportion of visitors
with the group satisfied grew from 30 to 40.Submitted by TUTOO on
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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