Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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who visited

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Museum prior to and after the renovation, and

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the levels of satisfaction of

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in the same period. In general, the

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and level of satisfaction after refurbishment is increased. The

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of

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who visited the Museum escalated significantly by 22,000, the year after renovation. Regarding the surveys which measured

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' satisfaction, the level of dissatisfied

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after the reconstruction decreased sharply from 40 per cent to just 15 per cent;

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, the

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of

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who are in the very satisfied category rises more than twice from 15 to 35 per cent.

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, while the not responding

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’ percentage remained steady at 5, the category of

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who were very dissatisfied experienced a significant decline by half.

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, the proportion of

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with the group satisfied grew from 30 to 40.