The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Educating adolescents is essential in some countries. but, educating seniors in

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not know how to read or write is

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important and the state should invest

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on

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statement because they already have experience in living their

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and reduce youngsters from dropping out of college as they don't have

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to pay. The

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reason is adults might already

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a way to earn

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and understood how to live their

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without any educational knowledge.

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proves that

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it might not be so important for them even though they don't study.

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, as they already found their way learning a new skill might not be a drastic change in their

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introduced night schools for elders, who really understood

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of

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, many people stated that they did not find

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of implementing it in their work. The

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main reason if there is no support for youngsters'

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high chance of discontinuing as they cannot afford fees.

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is because the more

money

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the

government

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invest

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elder people, the less they have for teenagers.

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cannot satisfy all poor students.

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, The Indian

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is trying to remove

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reimbursement for students as there is no budget to allocate and they have already promoted free

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for elders. To conclude, In many countries

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for adolescents is on the top list. but, educating elders and investing

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their

education

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the

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is not important as providing

education

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for young people because seniors in age have experience and already framed their careers and helping poor students will reduce the dropout rate as their families cannot afford

education

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