The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Educating adolescents is essential in some countries. but, educating seniors in

life

who

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not know how to read or write is

also

important and the state should invest

money

on

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this

.

This

essay strongly disagrees with

this

statement because they already have experience in living their

life

and reduce youngsters from dropping out of college as they don't have

money

to pay. The

first

reason is adults might already

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a way to earn

money

and understood how to live their

life

without any educational knowledge.

This

proves that

,

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it might not be so important for them even though they don't study.

Moreover

, as they already found their way learning a new skill might not be a drastic change in their

life

.

For example

, The Indian

government

introduced night schools for elders, who really understood

basics

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of

education

.

However

, many people stated that they did not find

chance

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of implementing it in their work. The

second

main reason if there is no support for youngsters'

education

there

are

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high chance of discontinuing as they cannot afford fees.

This

is because the more

money

the

government

invest

for

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elder people, the less they have for teenagers.

Hence

the

government

cannot satisfy all poor students.

For instance

, The Indian

government

is trying to remove

education

reimbursement for students as there is no budget to allocate and they have already promoted free

education

for elders. To conclude, In many countries

education

for adolescents is on the top list. but, educating elders and investing

on

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their

education

by

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the

government

is not important as providing

education

for young people because seniors in age have experience and already framed their careers and helping poor students will reduce the dropout rate as their families cannot afford

education

.