You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been living in Kleve for more than four years, and I have heard a piece of news about a shopping centre that will be opened next month.
When I was purchasing a new book associated with my major in the library, my eyes got stuck on
this
news which was published in the local newspaper. I was amazed about building a new shopping centre in our location the nearest shopping place is located ten kilometres away from our city, and it means that we have to spend a lot of time buying our requirements. Also
, this
shopping place would make the place more developed.
People who are living in this
area have a right to gain further
information about this
construction, such
as the number of stories and the location of the building. In addition
, I suggest that it would be great if sufficient parking facility
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facilities
has
considered.
Yours sincerely,
John CarlsonVerb problem
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task response
Address all parts of the task prompt clearly and thoroughly. Make sure to include information about how you feel about the plan and ask for more information in the relevant parts of the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure a clear and logical progression of ideas and use a wider range of cohesive devices such as linking words and referencing throughout the letter to improve coherence and cohesion.