You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have been living in Kleve for more than four years, and I have heard a piece of news about a shopping centre that will be opened next month. When I was purchasing a new book associated with my major in the library, my eyes got stuck on

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news which was published in the local newspaper. I was amazed about building a new shopping centre in our location the nearest shopping place is located ten kilometres away from our city, and it means that we have to spend a lot of time buying our requirements.

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shopping place would make the place more developed. People who are living in

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area have a right to gain

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information about

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construction,

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as the number of stories and the location of the building.

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, I suggest that it would be great if sufficient parking

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considered. Yours sincerely, John Carlson

khndniSat Nov 12 2022

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task response

Address all parts of the task prompt clearly and thoroughly. Make sure to include information about how you feel about the plan and ask for more information in the relevant parts of the letter.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure a clear and logical progression of ideas and use a wider range of cohesive devices such as linking words and referencing throughout the letter to improve coherence and cohesion.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

158 words

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Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Many young people do not know how to mnage their finances after graduating school. what are the reasonn and what can be done to solve this problem