You need a recommendation letter from your former university teacher. Write a letter to your teacher: • Give him the reasons for asking for the recommendation letter. • Give him/her details about your personal and academic background that can be added to your letter. • Tell him/ her about your future plans

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Dear Mr Ahmed, I am Reham and I was a student in the financial department at the college. I am writing

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you would write a recommendation letter so that I can persuade Cambridge university as a lecturer.

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, after

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I worked for a big company called Chevron, and one of my colleagues told me that Cambridge university search for new tutors in the financial department;

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, I sent them my paper and fortunately I passed the

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interview,

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they were excited because of the experience I have. A few days later, they sent me a mail to inform me about some required steps that included a recommendation letter from my college.

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, you were the

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one who came to my mind, and I would be appreciated it if you write

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letter for me.

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, you could tell them about the competition that I participated in the

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year and my research about improving the relationship between tutors and students, as I think it will give me the chance to be acceptable.

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, I have a plan that if I have got accepted, I will travel there with my children so that it will be beneficial to them to have appropriate education in

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a country. I would be grateful if you would help me in

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matter and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

239 words

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